Hehehehe.... Takehiko has a long sword...hehehe...
Top of the World:
Oh this one was so pretty? You have such a wonderful way with words, you really do. Like in one of the first lines: letting the dawn sunshine creep over the walls and breathe colour into the rich fabrics
I also liked that you had Kunzite relax but even at such an open state, he's still somewhat tight. The man will never truly let go, I don't think he ever could really, though, could he? ^_^
The idea of having him and Jadeite being familiar with riding eagles was really great, it made sense their characters and I thought you pulled them off splendidly. I'd love to see how Jadeite flies with the dragons.
All in all, I can see that your SilMil is just rich with character and I'm loving all the fantasy within it!
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Hehehehe.... Takehiko has a long sword...hehehe...
Top of the World:
Oh this one was so pretty? You have such a wonderful way with words, you really do. Like in one of the first lines: letting the dawn sunshine creep over the walls and breathe colour into the rich fabrics
I also liked that you had Kunzite relax but even at such an open state, he's still somewhat tight. The man will never truly let go, I don't think he ever could really, though, could he? ^_^
The idea of having him and Jadeite being familiar with riding eagles was really great, it made sense their characters and I thought you pulled them off splendidly. I'd love to see how Jadeite flies with the dragons.
All in all, I can see that your SilMil is just rich with character and I'm loving all the fantasy within it!