OH ADORE LOVE. This was incredible, again, the dialogue and imagery was just perfect.
The entire conversation with Usagi was just completely ON. I really envy your ability to write dialogue that sounds realistic, and you got the emotional parts done without going overboard.

And the fact that Usagi knows the score adn is "thx but no thx" to that vow...that Vow Still Bothers Me!!! Just like Adonis and his stupid freaking curse, that turd!

Great job and write moooooore.