sea_thoughts: Ruby in *The Legend of Ruby Sunday* (SMFire & Ice - dark_branwen)
sea_thoughts ([personal profile] sea_thoughts) wrote 2009-07-01 04:59 pm (UTC)

This was incredible, again, the dialogue and imagery was just perfect.

Thank you! :)

The entire conversation with Usagi was just completely ON. I really envy your ability to write dialogue that sounds realistic, and you got the emotional parts done without going overboard.

Well, I envy your ability to put swear words in a conversation. I can never write swearing properly.

And the fact that Usagi knows the score adn is "thx but no thx" to that vow...that Vow Still Bothers Me!!!

I think Serenity would have been a little oblivious to the implications (she was pretty self-centred it seems from her remarks to Venus) but Usagi has moved beyond that. I can't see her being happy that someone has voluntarily given up companionship for her, though she accepts Rei wants it. But as she says, things can change.

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