Wow, thank you! I'm not sure what to say. Was the beginning funny enough? I wanted the reader to think Mamoru was talking to Usagi.
I loved that you explored the concept of Hotaru and her father. I also really liked Tomoe's desperation reflected in his willingness to exploit Mamoru's weakness to get what he wants.
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Date: 2010-05-09 01:09 pm (UTC)I loved that you explored the concept of Hotaru and her father. I also really liked Tomoe's desperation reflected in his willingness to exploit Mamoru's weakness to get what he wants.
He's still manipulative, even as a ghost!