sea_thoughts: Ruby in *The Legend of Ruby Sunday* (SMNephrite in Exiles - dark_branwen)
sea_thoughts ([personal profile] sea_thoughts) wrote 2011-03-02 11:05 pm (UTC)

Re: *gibbering*

He really is very sad. Honestly, I'm glad nobody's accused me of making Jupiter OOC (so far) but I so often see her written as the calm, mature one and... I feel like Nephrite would bring out the worst in her in some ways. Things would definitely get worse before they got better

OMG, and when he started hallucinating Jupiter turning into Beryl, that was incredible. This whole thing was just utterly incredible.

Oh really? I don't think I write hallucinatory states very well so thanks for saying that.

And Kunzite allows himself to get cockblocked to help him.

Of course! I believe the saying is "bros before hos" and Nephrite needs him.

The best part though....Venus being bighearted and tender and helping him through this.

Awww, yeah. She can't stand to see someone suffer like that, especially since she feels the pain he's going through.

Beautiful. I love it. I want to marry all of your fics, especially this series. Please more. I will pay you cash money.

I intend to write a short to show how he and Venus did end up spending the night together because I realised as I finished that Kunzite was still too angry with Jadeite and Zoisite to leave Nephrite to sleep on his own. I'm guessing that's why people are so forgiving of this, because they know the cockblocking is temporary. *lol* And I'm going to tag this series 'golden city'. :)

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