One of my (many) favourite parts is how the image of Jupiter transforms into Beryl in front of Nephrite's eyes. That is some very, very strong writing there: perfect flow, perfect images, and very haunting. Almost gave me goosebumps!

And Jadeite and Zoisite, those utter idiots. What's wrong with whiskey, why does it have to be absinthe? I mean, really, they might as well have slipped him some acid. Idiots. They deserve the dressing down they got and I think they're suitably sorry.

A particular stroke of genius was Nephrite knowing that Venus would understand about him and Jupiter, about what it means that she kissed him back. I love how Venus is so very kind to him, and how her anger at Jupiter practically radiates off the screen. I'd love to read how Venus gives Jupiter a good long talk: blaming only Nephrite for her cheating on her boyfriend is wrong, and I bet Jupiter knows it, but it's easier this way, isn't it?

Ah, love love love.