ext_92315 ([identity profile] lovelylytton.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sea_thoughts 2011-03-06 11:06 am (UTC)

There is no way I can not like a fic where Jadeite gets away with calling Kunzite a "depressive mess". *laughs*
My absolute favourite lines were the ones that followed though:
"Of course, I am very drunk at this moment in time," he said in a calm voice, as if he hadn't just yelled something at the top of his lungs. "And if you happen to bring this up again, I will deny all knowledge and memory of what I just said."
Oh, Jadeite, I kind of love you.

Gotta hand it to him, the boy has balls. After his giant fuck-up with Nephrite, he still dares to get in Kunzite's face about Venus and actually lives to tell the tale. Might be due to the fact that he was right for once and that Kunzite really wants to end the evening in Venus's presence and by that, I also mean bed).

Zoisite lying down next to Nephrite to keep the nightmares away was a really cute touch, it spoke of their friendship and comradiere, I really like that.

Is there any way you can submit this to sm-monthly because this screams "award for best dialogue" so loudly that my ears ring.

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