More Golden City fic! Oh yay, this makes me irrationally happy! I love what you did with the first-person narrative here, how you gave us this exqusitive look into Makoto's mind. It really explains everything, doesn't it. The fierceness of her reaction, how horribly Nephrite suffers in later installments of the fic, and precisely why Minako will be able to knock some sense into her. Love it. A

I wish he would resent me.
Argh, this is so sad. So, so sad. But so, so good. (I'm pre-first coffee of the day, sorry. Better (and more elaborate) words will come to me later.

For now, let me just say that I love it.