This was incredible, again, the dialogue and imagery was just perfect.
Thank you! :)
The entire conversation with Usagi was just completely ON. I really envy your ability to write dialogue that sounds realistic, and you got the emotional parts done without going overboard.
Well, I envy your ability to put swear words in a conversation. I can never write swearing properly.
And the fact that Usagi knows the score adn is "thx but no thx" to that vow...that Vow Still Bothers Me!!!
I think Serenity would have been a little oblivious to the implications (she was pretty self-centred it seems from her remarks to Venus) but Usagi has moved beyond that. I can't see her being happy that someone has voluntarily given up companionship for her, though she accepts Rei wants it. But as she says, things can change.
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Date: 2009-07-01 04:59 pm (UTC)Thank you! :)
The entire conversation with Usagi was just completely ON. I really envy your ability to write dialogue that sounds realistic, and you got the emotional parts done without going overboard.
Well, I envy your ability to put swear words in a conversation. I can never write swearing properly.
And the fact that Usagi knows the score adn is "thx but no thx" to that vow...that Vow Still Bothers Me!!!
I think Serenity would have been a little oblivious to the implications (she was pretty self-centred it seems from her remarks to Venus) but Usagi has moved beyond that. I can't see her being happy that someone has voluntarily given up companionship for her, though she accepts Rei wants it. But as she says, things can change.