the atmosphere was tense and strangely gentle at the end
It's an awkward situation for Mamoru to be in and I wanted the reader to see that, so I think I succeeded. ^^ The toro nagashi is a very peaceful ceremony and I wanted to reflect that.
I really liked how you explored an almost forgotten part of canon
It really is my favourite activity when it comes to fanfiction. :)
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Date: 2010-05-08 03:38 pm (UTC)the atmosphere was tense and strangely gentle at the end
It's an awkward situation for Mamoru to be in and I wanted the reader to see that, so I think I succeeded. ^^ The toro nagashi is a very peaceful ceremony and I wanted to reflect that.
I really liked how you explored an almost forgotten part of canon
It really is my favourite activity when it comes to fanfiction. :)